Chapter 1
Since I joined, I've been reading many Archies to make up for what I missed.
I did crate my own fan fic and I hope it turns out well. It is supposed to be set a few months after the events of Sonic Generations, and like all fanfics, it is merely apocrypha.
I hope it turns out well, and you are free to suggest what I can to do to modify the story.
Enjoy.
The story still needs a good title, so if you have any suggestions please comment and rate Chapter 1.
I recommend this story for fans ages 11+.
CHAPTER 1
Shadow
A PARK IN STATION SQUARE 11:55 A.M.
OCTOBER 17, 2012
[Nice cool day at a park, Shadow is alone, sitting on a bench, relaxing]
Shadow: ...Maria... if you could only see this...
[Shadow looks at the quiet park and smirks weakly. A couple of kids are playing, and people are conversing]
Shadow: Why couldn’t the world just be like this, bright and accepting... too bad this world is full of s***. If there’s only a way to clean up the remainder of the world’s problems, I guess your wish will be fulfilled.
[Shadow looks at his smartphone*. It’s 12:05]
[sighs...]
Shadow: I guess it is time to see when my next mission is coming up.
* * *
12:10 PM
GUN Office
[Shadow stands in front of a GUN Office. He’s about to enter when he feels a strange presence]
Shadow: What the hell? Why do I feel a strong presence of Chaos energy?
[He looks around, and spots a van sitting nearby, the weird sensation gets more intense]
Shadow: So, this is where it’s coming from. What the hell? I better take a closer look.
[Shadow walks toward the van and sees the driver. The driver mouths out two words.]
Shadow: HEY, YOU WHAT ARE YOU-
Driver: Chaos Control.
[Time starts to slow down. The air starts to feel like a thick syrup.]
Shadow: Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww sssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh-
[The van driver presses a button]
[BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!]
[Glass around the area shatters slowly]
[The van emits a flash of light. The top of the van gets blasted off and debris and shrapnel starts to rise from the blown off top]
[The blacktop near the van breaks off and starts to levitate in the air]
[The driver is engulfed in flames and blackened debris]
[The flame and the debris starts to spread, burning through objects, and nearby pedestrians. Blast wave forms, and throws everything outward]
[Time goes back to normal]
BLAAAM!!
[Shadow gets knocked off and gets blown backward toward a wall]
CRACK!!
[Shadow hits his head and gets knocked out. A brown- blackish dust cloud descends and quietly drifts in the air]
*Imagine that it is a iPhone 4
The last scene is influenced by the movie "The Hurt Locker"
Shadow's story will continue in Chapter 2 and currently under development.